Article Summary: Your answer to “What Do You Do?” commonly referred to as your elevator pitch, is one of the most important tools in your communication toolbox. Why? Because if delivered right, it will get people to say, “I need that!” Consumer product companies have spent billions of dollars connecting to our hearts and wallets, to move us to buy their products. They have learned that brevity is better. Three proven steps are discussed to help you develop and deliver your own elevator pitch that gets people to say “I need you!”
The “What Do You Do?” Answer – A Key Tool in Your Sales Toolbox
Copyright © 2009. The Chief Storyteller®, LLC. and ThinkBusiness Magazine
Ira J. Koretsky
Imagine that you are at a Saturday barbeque. You know only the host. Everyone is dressed casually. A person walks up to you, smiles, and says, “Hello, what do you do?” How would you reply?
Your reply, commonly referred to as your elevator pitch, is one of the most important tools in your sales toolbox. Why? Because if delivered right, it will get people to say, “I need that!”
Consumer product companies have spent billions of dollars connecting to our hearts and wallets, to move us to buy their products. They have learned that brevity is better. How long is a typical radio or television advertisement? 15 to 30 seconds. How many words are in a headline of a newspaper or magazine article? Five to seven.
Think of your elevator pitch as your advertisement. It should be less than 100 words and take fewer than 30 seconds to say. Here are three proven steps to help you develop and deliver your own “I need that!” business story— a business story that will help you grow your revenue.
Step 1: Develop an Engaging Opening Statement
In a typical print advertisement or article, the headline is what draws you in. Headlines grab your attention by arousing your curiosity with the juiciest parts of the story. As such, when you respond to “What do you do?” or “Tell me about your business,” start off with an engaging opening statement—your headline. At The Chief Storyteller®, we refer to your opening statement as your Better Tomorrow MessageTM. You have to make your target audience’s life better someway, from a little better to significantly better (think strategic change).
During my last workshop series with the Environment Protection Agency, the room was filled with scientists and researchers, many of whom have Ph.Ds. Given their technical training, the first round of elevator pitches, as you might expect, was long and full of jargon. I then oriented their mindset and thought process to their audience, the American people. I reminded them that the average American is not a Ph.D. Through a variety of collaborative Smart Exercises and tools, they developed compelling and engaging opening statements, like Jessica’s—“We help you breathe better.”
When I share this example, some individuals say something like, “for the EPA, that’s obvious.” And my reply is always, “Then why are so few opening statements this short and engaging?” The response? Silence.
Indeed, if the development of a great opening statement to your elevator pitch were easy, everyone would have one. Here are some suggestions to start you on the path to develop your own.
- Keep it between three and seven words.
- Use active verbs.
- Follow these formats to start your opening statement: We are blank, We verb blank, We help blank, and We make blank. Here are a few examples:
- We are customer detectives, © Enfatico Consulting
- We mold water into excitement, © The Water Works, Inc.
- We are champions of healthy living, © American Diabetes Association® (ADA).
Conduct several brainstorming sessions with your management and marketing teams. Put on your copywriting hats and generate at least 100 headlines using different nouns, verbs, and benefits. Whittle down the list to your top five. Solicit feedback from trusted colleagues, partners, employees, and clients. When ready, select the one that best represents your company, culture, and benefits to your clients.
Step 2: Explain the Opening Statement
After getting your audience interested with your opening statement/Better Tomorrow MessageTM, offer additional details that intrigue your audiences. The details describe what you do while sharing some of the benefits of working with your company. Keep your explanation from one to three sentences.
Here is the ADA version:
“We help over 60 million Americans affected with diabetes, pre-diabetes and weight problems. Year-round, continuous programs are offered to every community in the United States – programs that make a real difference in people’s lives – community programs for awareness, education, fitness, and wellness.”
Step 3: Add a Customized Success Story
With your engaging Better Tomorrow MessageTM, complemented by intriguing details, add a customized success story. A customized success story lets your prospects and clients know you are listening, you are interested in them, and you can meet their expectations.
Most people use the same success stories for every prospecting meeting. Instead, develop a business story library so you can use the right story, for the right occasion, for the right prospect. Within your library, include a wide variety of business stories that match up to your ideal client profile situations. For example, if your target prospects are high tech firms with revenues of $5 to $50 MM, develop success stories for firms with $5 to $10MM, $11 to $20MM, and so on.
In your elevator pitch, limit your success story to two sentences.
Overall, keep your elevator pitch to fewer than 100 words–fewer than 75 is suggested.
Test and tweak your elevator pitch over time. Let it evolve. Try two versions at a networking event and see which one prompts more questions and better engages the people you meet. Be patient—it usually takes at least three months to craft an elevator pitch that most people will like—and often as much as six months. Continue to test and refine, and you too will have an “I need that!” elevator pitch that accelerates your sales process.
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